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Author: dimethylmercury
Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12-15-06 - Updated: 12-15-06 - Complete - id:2290652

I remember when

We used to sit

In the darkness

And count the stars.


But then you died

Leaving me alone

In the darkness

And I stopped counting.


Then one day

My child asked me

To count the stars

Along with him.


I let go of

The bitterness

That consumed me

When you left.


I took his hand

And one by one

In the darkness

We counted the stars.

A/n: This was sort of inspired by the quote “When it is dark enough, you can see the stars”. Yup... Please R/R(:



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