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Dear reader,
You, obviously, are about to read the original version of "7 Deadly Sins". I would like to ask of you a few things.
Keep in mind that this was first written when I was in my Freshman year of High School and my mind as a writer was not as attune as you all or as I am now. So please bear in mind my wording.
Keep in mind with my formally being a new writer to the wonderful website known as our dear , I was not descriptive of people and places. Those pretty much leaving you open to interpretation of how my characters looked like and how the setting (which was actually supposed to be London but appeared to be a small town/suburb) really was.
My grammar is not as good as it is now. I used words (as you can see from my first review) that weren't the right words or had different meanings.
I edited one chapter, which goes back up to the first numeral. I forgot to take a word out/add one in so it might get a bit goofy.
My style then is a lot different then it is now, as are all my other works on Quizilla and/or Fanfiction. My style itself has become darker than it was before as you will soon see in the revised/rewritten version and I have restricted my setting and character's looks and personalities to how I interpret them.
Thank you for deciding to read this unfinished work. It says it's "complete" but really I lost interest. Sorry for those who loved/adored this piece.
Sincerely,
Alenix Forte Youkill