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and that was just the beginning
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‘i love you’ she initiated with a smile ‘i love you more’ & thus it began a childish game all couples play... [[Attempt at a different format]]
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Words: 225 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 01-01-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2298221
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(-& that was j u s t the b.e.g.i.n.n.i.n.g-)

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'i l o v e y o u'

she initiated with a smile

-)) 'i love you more'((-

& thus; it b.e.g.a.n

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(-a childish g.a.m.e

all c o u p l e s play-)

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'i love you most'

she l a u g h e d with m.i.r.t.h

-)) 'i love you more than that' ((-

he said candidly

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(-the n e v e r e n d i n g

mock argument-)

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'more than the stars'

she c.o.u.n.t.e.r.e.d

-)) 'more than the mass

of all the planets' ((-

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(-& it c o n t i n u e d

through the short hours-)

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'more than the world's population'

-)) 'more than the number of people

on & will be on this earth' ((-

he smirked—eyes g.l.e.a.m.i.n.g

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(-until that m o m e n t in time

as he had finally w.o.n-)

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-)) 'more than the weight of

everyone on earth;

the mass of the stars and planets;

& the horse power of a Mercedes CLK GTR' ((-

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.&.&.

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(-& that was j u s t the

b.e.g.i.n.n.i.n.g-)

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