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A/N: Okay, so I haven’t written something in a long time. Or, I have, but I didn’t post it and/or I lost it. I really need some feed back to see if coming back to writing and posting was a good idea. This poem was written mostly at late night hours while I had insomnia. As if that’s a good enough excuse for possible suck factor of this poem. I think it's pretty bad, but I post so other people can tell me if it sucks like I think it does or if I'm , it’s written for a friend of mine in a very odd relationship. That’s all I’m saying… read and review please! Thank you!
You’ve got those dark eyes;
The kind that pierce the night,
The kind that’d undress me at night.
So dark they cover up your lies,
So deep the fire inside burns bright.
You’re not the average beauty.
But beauty is only skin deep,
Hiding black secrets and lace fantasies deep.
It’s the soul behind, what’s inside that keeps me
Wide awake while the rest of the world sleeps…
My head couldn’t spin any faster.
I can’t breathe, can’t eat, can’t sleep,
I can’t breathe, can’t see, can’t feel.
Feeling like a slave to this crave, you the master;
Tell me, what if this could be real?
(Make believe won’t help you now)
I could be more than a black lace dream,
Make your wishes come true,
Take the loneliness from you,
But for now it’s a dream it seems.
Let me be more than a black lace fantasy,
Someone who’d hold you,
Just to be close to you.
So remove the gossamer wings from me
And let the dream begin…
(Let me be more than a black lace dream)
You think of me at night
When the figures prowl the halls
And you can’t rest in these walls
While it’s just a dream, so it would seem the light
Blurs reality from the fiction of it all
You see me in your reverie
All alone with nothing on
Just the two of us nothing on
Can’t fight what the night makes of me
But what happens when the reverie is gone?
(Will it all end when the dream is gone?)
I could be more than a black lace dream
Make your wishes come true
Take the loneliness from you
But for now it’s a dream it seems
Let me be more than a black lace fantasy
The lover in your arms
Victim of your seductive charms
So take it off and come be with me
And watch the black lace top fall away
(I’ll be the whore in your bed
I‘ll be the angel in your head)
You’ve got me wrapped around your finger.
The dream does not have to linger.
We could make the passion more
Than a dream, just lock the door…
Just touch me, let me love you,
Under you, on you, next to you,
Let’s make your wildest dreams come true,
‘Cause I don’t want anyone but you
There’s powerful lust between us
Just another wish inside our heads
While we toss and turn in bed
We can dream until it consumes us
But we can live this fantasy instead
(Who’s to say we can’t be together?)
I could be more than a black lace dream
Make your wishes come true
Take the loneliness from you
But for now it’s a dream it seems
Let me be more than a black lace fantasy
The lover in your arms
Victim of your seductive charms
So take it off and come be with me
I could be more than a black lace dream
Make your wishes come true
Take the loneliness from you
But for now it’s a dream it seems
Let me be more than a black lace fantasy
Someone who’d hold you
Just to be close to you
So remove the gossamer wings from me
So take it off and come be with me
So remove the black lace top from me
So take it off and be with me
And let the dream begin…