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Author: crisscross-cat An awful title, I know. Please suggest better ones. This is a muchupdated version of something I thought of a long time ago. Please read the one on my DevArt account to get the full impact. It's really much better.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Spiritual - Words: 144 - Favs: 1 - Published: 01-07-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2300683
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(murmurs.)
it's a grey-gold silhouette, talking
but not to me. language
that sounds
like its color–reminds
me of tail lights
(through a window)
yelling to each other in
harsh, bright tones.
(move!)
but the fog
(always)
interrupts them with
clouded philosophy and patron-
ization.
the closet feels
like a broken tail light
(i think),
as it yawns to rattle
something loose, deep
inside it. unfinished
thoughts snake out and
around me, coiling
to pull away
to set free. shivering
out among them, my body
turns to shadows
(of all the paper-
backs i've ever read)–their
yellow-and-black covers fall-
ing to dust
on
the
floor.
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