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The poem is much better then the title. Please R&R. Criticism very welcome. Only rated teen to be safe.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Words: 103 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 01-11-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2302902
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Devotion of a Teenage Love Story
There's a place out there for us
Somewhere where we will be fine
Love without the fuss
Even when we fight
I constantly see you
Hanging out or with your friends
I know you see me too
Even when we have to pretend
The soul but a voice
That you hear in my eyes
I'm glad you made the choice
Even though it's one that I despise
That place just for us
Is only heard of in fairy tales
Life may be tough
Even then I will not fail
3am on October 19th, 2006
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