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Author: Pretty Peaceful
Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Reviews: 1 - Published: 01-20-07 - Updated: 01-20-07 - Complete - id:2307190

Doubt?

A/N: I tried a new form of writing hereƖ I just wanted something different from my usual style. Hopefully the message is conveyed, but tell me what you think of the format anyway.

A little bit excited
a smile, she blushes
and
it's official
a Boyfriend.

A few days on
blissful Partnership
because
she is part of the Crowd
fitting in.

It is so nice
but little seeds of
Doubt
begin to form, one by
One.

Guilt trickles in
slowly, ever so
Softly
she begins to wonder
Is it wrong?

He pours his heart
and loves her a million years
Love
she doesn't feel
The Same.

Perhaps she should wait
let time be the judge
relax, let
Love
take its course.

a relationship
a journey
a story

Unfolds.



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