Reflections

Reflections of a Broken heart

wallow with so much pain

When your living the way I do

and only feel others vain

And though you want to end it here

and never start again

there's never a good time to let your life end.

Because when you are living those who you know

will keep every memory of you aglow.

So when you think of dying

all those times aday

All those people in your life

can never go away.

Origional

Reflections of a broken heart
wallow with so much pain
withpeices that seem broken apart
from being put through so much vain
A heart will stop beating
against its safe rib cage
but the hurtful words will live foreever
can build up so much rage
Punch and fight their ways of life
can cause you nothing but strife
You need to learn when no means no
and stop the blood from falling
for when you heal the broken heart
you'll find the darkness is no longer calling

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