Alright, three poems! they all suck by the way... just postin to see if I can make them a little bit better (if i get reviews)

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Houston minds

Dazzaling nights

stars fragmenting the sky

beautiful time to live

and yet I dare ask it

"will I die tonight?"

For my dear sweet Aubrey

Her eyes features the rattle

of a desert snake

most feared out there

the hair that frames her face

disguites itself from what it really is

a cornfield

withered and dead

Her body; the most penetrating thing of all

like a spear right through your heart

is a waterfall

made out of--

poisened water

Sunsets never die

The sun is nearly down

the day is almost over

the clouds are saying bye

the hill are almost dormant

and i will wait here

to watch the day start over.

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okay. they do suck but if people review me and tell me what i have to do to make them better i assure you you will not have to be reading poems like this.