
| Life in Standstill
Author: subito video A poem about a candle.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 132 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 02-17-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2321592
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My poetry class chose an object and did a brainstorm on how to write about it, and then we each wrote individual poems. Every poem managed to be so different from the rest it was almost surprising. This is what I came up with. (Out of curiosity, what color do you think the candle is?
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Lights out
With no backup generator
A single candle found
Unburied from a pile
Of long-dormant memories
Of confused hourglass metal
Atomic structure unknown
The wick is lit
Of how bright one small flame
Really is
Seeps into the air
Like the musty perfume
The candle emits
Warms the body
But one candle lets
The eyes experience new warmth
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