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I was bored one day and this idea came to me while I was watching the anime InuYasha, you’ll notice some similarities with the demon factor to the anime but nothing more than that.
It is under major revision but otherwise good. I need some support thought because I want to actually write this into a full novel. It may not work out but that is why you’re here. You’re going to help me get all the bumps and wrinkles out of my drafts.
Don’t worry I love you all.
Demon Child 176
Character:
Josh:
16years (human); 160 (demon)
Half fox demon, half human
176th child of 352 children
Hated because he has human blood, and because he is the only hanyou and weakest (only demons)
Rebellious
Huge punk
Keeps to himself
Skilled artist (seems to be his one true passion)
Hates himself and his hanyou form
Wishes to be demon like older brother and his stepbrothers and stepsisters
How Josh looks:
(Human/half-Demon)
Piercing green eyes/gold
Short black messy hair/silver
Strong muscular arms and legs (can’t really tell because he looks so thin and weak)
Peach/tan skin
6 feet tall
16years old
Human
Only child (adopted)
Loved by friends and adopted family.
Few to no enemies
Lots of suitors (cousin forces George onto her and even her own cousin)
Rebellious
Punkette
Favorite animals: Foxes, wolves and owls
martial artist
Athletic, social, and loves to dance
Wishes to become an outstanding author
How Michelle looks:
Stunning blue eyes
Wavy brown hair cut to the middle of her back
Very beautiful with gentle curves and good chest size
Peach
5foot 7inches
Summary:
Josh is not only a great, handsome, young, talented artist and soccer player, he is also hanyou. Half fox demon and half human. He wants to feel like part of the family. The only problem is, is that he is the 176 child, living in a house holding a combination of 352 siblings and stepsiblings along with his father and stepmother. Will he ever be able to fit in if he is hated for being what he is? A hanyou.
Demon Child 176
By: Jocelyn
Josh awoke to the annoying sound of his alarm clock. Shuffling noises of sleepy children only added to the dreadful sound. Josh reluctantly lifted himself off his bed and dragged his sore limbs to the shower. After a good fifteen minutes he exited his private bathroom fully dressed and ready to go. He grabbed his black school bag after throwing on his classic black and white converse.
He jumped the stairs two by two, skidding to a halt before the dinning room doors. He threw them open only to reveal his stepsiblings crowding around the food covered long table. He watched as his two young human stepsiblings fighting over the tallest chair. He caught pieces of the heated conversation between father and daughter. The others were just fighting for milk, orange juice, bowls, spoons, bacon and the last link of sausage.
He casually walked past the normal breakfast scramble and headed for the kitchen, slipping in unnoticed. There the cook was waiting for him. His lunch sat their on the counter with his breakfast not to far in front. He ate the food, silently thanking his friend for saving him his rations. He bid he cook farewell as he took out of the back door.
The wheels of Joshes skateboard rolled along on the graveled path, making Josh slow down and finally stopping so he could pick up his skateboard. He checked the wheels only to find them chiseled by the road. He decided to walk the rest of the short trip to his high school. As he strolled along he could barely register his older stepbrother speeding by him with the youngest kitsune a little ways behind.
He watched in envy at the speed they both carried. He new if he were to ever race him he would lose by the whole race. That speed, if measured next to a car, they would be going about 130mph. And that from all he has witnessed was slow compared to he oldest kitsune’s top speed.
He wished he could run like that. If only he could be full demon like his stepsiblings. Even the younger ones were full demon, or full human. He was the only cross. A mutt. A mix of two different species. He was a hanyou. Half fox demon and half human. He was a cast out of both worlds. Feared, hated. No one but the family knew that he was a hanyou. In fact the whole world didn’t believe that demons existed.
He shook the thoughts from his mind as he continued his steady walk toward ‘jail’ a.k.a. high school. The campus was filled with students. He caught some of the conversations between the groups of girls. They spoke about what happened over the summer vacation like it was some kind of nice ride. He even heard that one lost their virginity to her boyfriend. Josh sighed shaking his head from side to side, his hair swinging wildly from the action.
Suddenly and without warning he caught a portion of a conversation he deemed interesting. It was the leading quarterback for the football team. He was telling his football buddies about his baby cousin. He said that she was coming west from Colorado to California.
“Guys I am telling you. She is smart, and from the last time I saw her, she was hot.
Seriously. I’ll see if I can get her with you George. She seems your type. Thin, petite, brown hair, blue eyes and a great figure. She also plays sports. Though I haven’t really seen her since I was nine. And that was ten years ago, but she was beautiful for a seven year old.”
“Are you serious!?” came Georges booming voice.
“Man, your mind is always in the gutter, even for your cousin.” remarked a fellow football star.
“Well she is not really my cousin since she was adopted, but who cares. Anyway she is perfect for you George. Believe me. Before you know it she will be asking you to get into her pants. Geeze…. That is how my last girlfriend was by the end of the first two days of dating.”
“Well. Did you give her any?”
“Of course!!! Only an idiot wouldn’t get into the pants of the leading cheerleader!!!”
“Damn! You had sex with the sex icon for the school!?! That’s amazing!”
“How was it?”
At this point Josh left the conversation. He really didn’t need to know that. That was all high school was really all about these days. It was a competition to see who would get laid the most in the four years of high school. The school was full of sex craved guys and girls who wanted a one night stand. He never understood it. He had girlfriends yes, but they all seemed to want to use him to say that they had a boyfriend, or possibly get laid. He and his best friend were probably one of the only males to not have had some form of sex. Weather is was oral or intercourse he was virgin through and through. He had never even given away his first kiss. He was saving everything he held dear for the right person. She just hadn’t come along yet.
Josh was stirred out of his thought by a loud “HI!!!” in his ear. After his ears stopped ringing he turned to face the person who screamed in that horrid earsplitting one syllable word. It just so happened to be his best friend Zack.
Zack was a dirty blond haired, hazel eyed young man. His hair was gelled up in spikes and his small gold hoop earring hung off his right ear lobe. Zack was tall and well built. He was muscular though it didn’t really show and his long legs were made for the track course. Zack is what anyone would call the pervert of the school. In Josh’s opinion, Zack’s perverted-ness was small compared to the horny teens running up and down the football field.
“Did you really have to scream that loud?”
“No, I just love doing it for two reasons. One, because I felt like it and two because I have been calling you for a while and you didn’t answer me.”
“Oh? You were? Sorry.”
“So what were you thinking about? Was is a girl?”
“……..” (place in sweat drop)
“I knew it! It was a girl. So who is the lucky thing that gets to be on your mind?”
“Zack.”
“EWWWWW! I never though you bent that way!!!”
“Get your mind out of the gutter!”
“Are you seriously gay!?!”
“Of course not. I said your name to get your attention all on me and you thought that I was thinking about you. Gross! Sorry, I like you a lot, but not that much.”
Zack’s ears immediately turned red from embarrassment. That was another thing about Zack. He was quick to judge. Unless he really knew the person very well he would judge them. Other than that he was a very loyal friend. Just as Zack was going to start up a conversation the school bell rang, signaling that all the students should get inside and to their classes unless they wanted a detention.
“See ya in lunch. Bye!” Zack called out from the other side of the corridor just before the mob of students came pouring in.
Josh grabbed his things as the final school bell rang. He walked out and waited in front of the old willow tree for Zack. In a matter of seconds Zack appeared on his trusty skateboard. He was grinning and that only meant one of two things. He was planning something really good or he finally got a date with one of the girls in the school. Josh gave him a ‘let me in on the idea’ look. This only made Zack’s grin even bigger.
“Come walk with me.” he simply stated.
As they walked out of the school grounds, the school campus was filled with a male scream. Josh knew that yell all too much. That was the sound of their principle. God only knew what happened to the poor old man this time. Josh looked over to see Zack trying badly too hold back his laugh. He could see the unshed tears of mirth in his eyes. Only one question came to mind.
“What did you do this time?”
“Man you should have been there. I rigged the old mans rolling chair to a cage filled with spiders.” he choked out between laughs
“God. You know how much the man despises insects.”
“Oh… but I haven’t even told you the best part.” Zack stated as the continued to skate down the boardwalk.
“As you could guess, the old man would sit in his chair and pull it up closer to his desk releasing the spiders. The man would probably jump on his desk and reach in the drawer for the insect killing spray can. Well in that drawer I placed a nice amount of roaches. That spray can is useless now!” once Zack finished this part of the story he had to stop the skateboard or he probably would have fallen off from all the laughing.
At this Josh couldn’t help but laugh. Zack and him were the schools rebellious trouble makers. They had so much fun pulling pranks on the boring teachers and the snobby principle. They also loved to freak out the cheerleaders. It was just too hilarious.
Both boys laughed all the way home.
“So what prank should we pull tomorrow.” asked Zack
“Fresh out of ideas already?”
“Hey I had my spark of genius already with the prank on the principle. Its your turn.”
“Alright. Well I over heard the football players talking and it was about their summer vacation. One of them got laid and has a cousin that is transferring in tomorrow.”
“So what are you saying?”
“Well the football players cousin is female and the football player wants to hook her up with George.”
“The defender?”
“Yah. You know how the football players have practice in the morning?”
“Yah, and?”
“What do you say to the color pink?”
This got Zack a little confused. But finally he got the idea.
“You are evil did you know that?!”
“See you tomorrow in the boys varsity locker room.” Josh turned to leave but Zack said one question that really got him to stop.
“Hey, how are we going to work this plan out if they have lockers? With locks!”
“Good question.”
There was a pause of complete silence before Josh spoke up again.
“You know they keep the locker combination of file in the office that is in the boys varsity locker room. That door is never locked. All we have to do is get the locker combinations and that is it. We open up the lockers and put the plan into action.”
“Alright. But since it is your idea, you will be buying the dye.”
“Don’t worry about that! I will get the perfect one.”
“See you tomorrow. 4 o’clock sharp.”
“See you then. This prank will be worth the lack of sleep.”
He jogged the hole way to the hell hole he called school. He could hear the bottles of pink dye in his bag clink together. When he got there he saw Zack trying to pry the window to the boys varsity locker room open. Josh sighed at Zack’s fruitless attempt to get into the school. With a smirk Josh crept up behind his best friend and with one hand he wrapped his fingers around the metal chain that hung from Zack’s black semi-destroyed jeans. With a firm grip in place around the cool metal his smile widened and he pulled his friend.
Zack gave a loud girly scream as he was pulled from his entryway. “What the Fuck!”
“Man you shouldn’t sneak up on a fella that’s trying to do something illegal. You scared the living daylights out of me.” Zack said as he pulled his blonde hair from his eyes with as much dignity as he could muster.
“Well it was just to tempting to resist. Also if we want to do this right then I suggest using the back door. The team is out there already practicing. We want to know who is here so that we don’t waste our precious and I must say expensive dye.” Josh didn’t comment on his friends girlish scream. He just wanted to put that behind him. To see his rebellious friend scream like a girl when she finds a mouse or roach in her home is quite scary.
“Oh….” was his very intelligent reply.
“Come on girly-man.” Josh snickered as he said this. He just couldn’t let his friend live it down. As scary as it was to witness, now that he wrapped his mind around it, it was hilarious.
Zack grumbled the whole way as the duo walked around the school to the back fields. They could see the whole football team there pounding each other like rocks thrown against another stubborn rock. Josh’s comment seemed to be forgotten in an instant as Zack grinned to his fellow partner. This is going to be the best prank in (insert high school name) for years to come.
Both walked into the locker room without any one noticing them. In no time they found the names of every single varsity football player and their locker combo. Between the two they both had four bottles of pink hair dye. Once all the lockers had been opened they brought out both the body wash and the two in one shampoo and conditioner that all the players seem to have. With quick efficiency the pair of mischievous troublemakers poured the dye into every bottle making sure not to miss any, and for good luck they placed an extra couple of squirts. When they were finished capped every bottle and placed each one into their appropriate locker. When they had shut the last locker door they could hear the team starting to march in. The sweat coming off they team was completely unbearable. A shower was definitely coming their way. With final snicker the two left the locker room to dump the only evidence linking them to the crime. There was no way the school could ever pin it on them.
"Let the fun begin." Josh said as he watched the last bottle of hair dye fall into the dumpster behind the school grounds.