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Author: JustIsh.
Fiction Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Reviews: 2 - Published: 02-20-07 - Updated: 02-28-07 - id:2323089

The Last Asher

Part 1: The Business of Souls

When it first happened it wasn’t that big of a deal. Since then it has been blown completely out of proportion. If only Satan had been a little smarter! If he had kept things a little bit more organized down there in his multi-layered home we wouldn’t be up here ready to jump down to Earth. I wouldn’t have to go to Earth…

So, Satan screws up. One of their storage buildings burned down. Go figure. They lost nearly a tenth of the souls down in Hell, you do the Math as to how many that is. Anyway, every freaking one of them got sent back to the place of their death. Now they’re running around Earth causing all sorts of trouble.

The backup of souls basically made Hell’s entire business collapse. As of right now, over a thousand people are standing in the line in front of the gates of Hell. Prudence can’t seem to get things sorted out and now all of them are getting sent back too. It is a complete disaster. Now, even Heaven is getting affected. Hence me going to Earth...I don’t think I would go if I didn’t have to.

The extreme increases of deaths have collapsed our computer system. God made it and it still can’t keep up with 1000 plus deaths a minute. Of course, it doesn’t matter if they die now. They just pop up back at Earth. And now I have to go down there…

(This is just a small introduction to what the story is about. There are four prolouge parts: The Business of Souls, Hell Burns Down, Down to Earth, and The Meeting. After the next three are posted on here, the story goes into an episodic format, different stories about the same characters in different situations. Also, each chapter is from a different characters point of view usually alternating between the two main characters, Asher 3 and Eddy Demakis.)



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