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Author: Opal Rose
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Reviews: 3 - Published: 03-02-07 - Updated: 03-02-07 - Complete - id:2327888

Please review. After reading my authors note at the bottom. But please, please, please review.

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She cried. Music played in the background, but she couldn't understand the lyrics. Though she wasn't making a sound anyone else could hear, inside she was screaming at herself. She made a mistake, she went too far, and she didn't know how to fix it. She didn't even know if she could fix it. But still, the music played happily, not knowing of her pain.

She heard her door open, and heard someone walk in, but only in the back of her mind. She couldn't concentrate on anything. Vaugely she felt someone put a hand on her shoulder and she felt herself being pulled against something warm. Soft sounds were whispered into her ear, and she welcomed them. She held on tight her the person holding her, needing something, though she wasn't sure what. Still, the music played.

Whoever it was holding her lifted her up and carried her through the house. Somewhere in the back of her mind she thought about staining the carpet, but the thought was quickly brushed aside. A few words were said from the person carrying her, and another voice answered. She had calmed down some, and the screaming quieted, if only a little. She still couldn't understand what was being said, and she was still sure she didn't really care.

Something was pressed against her wrists, and she screamed out loud. It hurt worse than anything she'd ever felt, then she remembered it was exactly what she was going for. Softly, she heard music playing.

She writhed around, her eyes still closed. Sirens in the distance broke through her haze, and her eyes broke open. No...she thought. Bright light almost blinded her. Blinking, she stopped moving and looked around. All around her, music played.

There was nothing but white wherever she looked. She didn't know if it went on forever, or if she was just trapped in a small spaced that seemed like it went on forever. The music played on.

There was nothing, no one, anywhere. Nothing moved, and there was no sound other than the music. Like in some mad-man's game, it was both empty and endless. She tried to scream. It made no sound. The music played...

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I have no idea where this comes from, what it's about, or why/how I wrote it. I just did. You're probably going "What the hell?" I agree. I am too.

So please, please, please review. Let me know what you think.



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