A/N: aki69 : Thanks for the insight. However, as most Prologues are, not much information is given (then, of course... you seem intelligent enough to have already known this). It is to build a mood for the story and for the reader to know what is to happen, obviously. And yes, if I may add... you are "ascertaining conclusions much too early" (as you mentioned) when asking about the characters. He is just one of the main characters, as you shall soon find out.

And for the topic of the person known as Lccorp2, yes I have heard of him and have seen his work in reviews. He seems to be quite intelligent when it comes to ficticious writings. Published? Wow... that's quite a thought. However, seeing as I have seen Lccorp2's reviews... I think he is quite hard to please (with knowledge comes high expectation, naturally).

Thank you for the review, once more (and I am flattered I have drawn a fan from the many different writers in this wonderful copyrighted... ;;; place. Once I receive the time, I shall return the favor... but seeing as I am quite busy as of right now... do not anticipate it for a while. But, nevertheless... I shan't forget.

Nimit

Altameria: I'm, of course, still working on getting my style down. I think I am improving (I hope). However, since you have asked it... it shall be done. A writer must know how much to "spicen his stew", if I may. Too many descriptions become distracting and divert the reader from the plot. I'll try to make the story just a smidge more flavourful .

Thanks,

Nimit

Chapter 3

Chapter 1 continued...

“Mirror,” I thought, creating a barrier that used my opponents’ energies against them. They flew back in rage, glaring at me as they flipped in perfect form and landing.

“Heh,” they both spoke at the same time. “Nothing surprising from the great Wingèd Seraph of the Lunar Queendom.”

“You received the sacred treasure?” Melanie questioned, continuing without Shade. My eyes lit up in horror and realization of how she knew such a well-kept secret. “Interesting,” she sighed, reading my face as if it were a giant sign with emotions. “I always knew you were the Queen’s favorite. I used to be… but as I left the alliance of the Moon, so did the ‘Gift’ against my wishes.”

“Much has happened since my five-year leave. I shan’t let you be at peace, Shade and Melanie. Remember that.”

“Hmph,” they repeated once more in unison.

“You destroyed every color of my life… so now I shall you. Every color in your lives shall be white. No color, no life, just breath. You’ll be a living corpse when I’m finished with you.”

“You wish,” they repeated one last time in unison before a great power engulfed both them and myself.