My first poem. er... hope you like it?

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Feeling your Love caress my heart

Feeling your light touch my soul.

Feeling like the Golden sun

Feeling the way you move me

Feeling you will touch me life

Knowing I can’t lose you

For you are my life, heart & soul

Forever I am yours

I love you forever

and this day

Love will be redifined

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Is that okay? It's just my first poem and i am an amateur. Review please