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Personally one of my favorites, this is called Ocean's Song. I wrote it in my Creative Writing Class. Got a 94 on it. It's a Rimbaud poem spin off. So, I hope you enjoy, and I am sorry that I cannot make spacing or all that fancy stuff, I just don't know how! If someone wants to help me, I'd love you forever!!!! 333 Please Enjoy and leave me comments!!! and... how bout even SUGGESTIONS?!!! Like...gimme something to write. Writer's block is horrid. If you have a story I could try to write, or a poem you want to see me try out... please lemme know!! Drop me a message!! Oh... and P.s the opening line my teacher didn't like, but I do, so lay off. LOL.
Ocean's Song
And Never before did I not look
and salty air tasted so sweet
the warmth of the sun
burning and flaking the flesh
of my shoulders and nose.
Freckles poked out on my bared arm
and my sandy toes tingled as it dried
the air was suffocating,
and it was a long walk.
The water, a wet sky
with crashing clouds
and birds that drown, but remain alive.
Alive, like the wild roses,
on the sides of the cliffs nearby,
alive in this seaweed-infested seagull dung.
Parent called me back, I kept on walking
and I felt the burden leave my breaking back
felt it straighten as if I had been carrying 100 pounds of sand.
I closed my eyes, picturing a small boat
with navy sails,
and a shine on the rail,
two orange life jackets
seen from the shore,
while the people acompanying them
Hold hands.
The ocean singing sweet melodies
that reach their ears,
it must reach mine as well,
since I felt the pull
to lash into the waves,
to sing along to the music,
to hold my breath, and swim away from the shore,
away from the parent calling for her child,
which I am no longer...
The wind has caught the tune
which surprised me,
for all know the wind is tone deaf,
but he sang along,
adding his baritone voice in my ear,
as the sea sang high and low.
And the Buoy always seemed so far.