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Debbie's boyfriend
His mom decided to buy my house, I watched them move in their expensive things, the boy moved into my room. I followed him through the house asking questions.
I asked "What year is it?" And he replied to me.
"2012"
"2012!?" I looked at him shocked "I've been dead for 5 years!?"
I was still trying to get it through my head when he asked me "Who are you?"
I looked at him and said "I'm Dorian, you?"
"I'm Shoata. So, how did you die?" He asked me and I looked at him sadly.
"I think my father killed me, he stabbed me in the chest repeatedly, before I fell asleep" I said now looking at the floor.
"You fell asleep? Do you mean that you died?" He asked puzzled
"I think so" I saw his mother approaching him and told him to follow her. He did and I followed behind them. They went into the living room and I saw a man in there that seemed familar to me but I couldn't quite place who he was. Whoever he was, there was something I didn't like about him.
Shoata's mother looked at him and said "Shoata, sweetie, This is my boyfriend, who I wanted you to meet, his name is Nick"
'Nick?' I thought 'hmm Nick... Nick... Nick!' My face paled as I realized why he looked familiar, why I didn't like him. He was the man who killed me, he was the reason I died, he was my father. He looked Different then I remembered him, He didn't look like he drank as much as he did and he had lost some of his hair. But his eyes never changed, they looked as bad as they did when I was still alive. "Shoata, That's him! He was my father! He was the man who killed me!" I saw Shoata pale as well
"Nice to meet you Nick, I'm Shoata" he said never taking his eyes off of him
He said with a fake smile "It's great to finally meet you Shoata! I've heard a lot about you"
"Well I'll leave you two to get to know each other some more while I go to the store I'll be back soon" Shoata's mother told him and she left.
Silence filled the room I was in. "Run before he kills you to." I told Shoata.
"Well I have to go do something, good bye" He was about to leave when my father stopped him.
"Debbie said you had interest in the dead, is that true?" his gaze never left Shoata, I noticed that he shivered some
"Yes" and tried to leave, only to get interrupted again.
"If I was you I would stop that ridiculous fascination of yours if you know whats good for you" I saw him glare at Shoata
"Is that a threat?" Shoata asked
"Yes it is" he said his eyes never leaving him. Shoata was able to leave. I followed him up to our room.
Shoata paced back and fourth around the room worried about his mom's boyfriend, that he might come in at any moment to kill him. "Come on Dorian, lets go to the woods"
As we walked though the woods, it sounded like someone was following us. I told Shoata that I was going to check it out. I stayed behind waiting for whatever it was. Something was wrong I started to feel weird. I fell to my knees, I tried to talk but I couldn't it was like something was choking me, I couldn't breath. The world around me started to fade. Something hurt in my chest, it went away for a bit then it came back hurting me again.
"c'm 'ne ki' 've" I heard a voice but I couldn't understand it, suddenly I went back to the woods. I was finally able to breath. I took a breath and began coughing. Shoata came running up to me.
"You alright? I looked for you, but I couldn't find you" Shoata said "What happened?"
"I was in darkness, I heard a voice, but I couldn't understand it" I said still coughing some. "How long was I gone?"
"About an hour" he said
"It only seemed like a minute" I said "Do you have any Idea were I was?"
"No, I don't. Sorry" Shoata said
End of chapter Two
I'm sorry it took so long but I've been having writers block on almost all of my storys and I've been working on An Odd World Part 2 Anyway Please R&R!