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Author's Note:
OK, this is my first poem posted on FictionPress - be kind!
I really hope you like the poem, I do, heh heh.
Enjoy!
Summary: 'If you followed me on a walk through the sunshine of my mind' Vivid descriptions, partially rhyming. I'm pretty proud of this one.
If You Followed Me © 2007
by The-Truth-Will-Strike-You-Down, AKA Bonnie
If you followed me on a walk,
In the sunshine of my mind,
What would you see?
Who would I be?
Would I be a yellow fairy,
Skipping between rows of sunflowers,
Higher than high,
Taller than tall?
Would I be a gargoyle,
Grinning hideously at the top of my
Great, grey stone wall?
If you followed me on a walk,
Through the tempest of myself,
What would you see?
Who would I be?
Would I be a giant black wolf,
Prowling the dense forests of Scotland,
Dimmer than dim,
Darker than dark?
Would I be the ghost of a lady,
All dressed in white, in an empty room,
Barer than bare,
Starker than stark?
If you followed me on a walk,
Through the corridors in my head,
What would you see?
Who would I be?
Would I be a great horse,
Pounding with my silver hooves the earth of a road that never ends,
Over and over,
On and on?
Would I be a painting,
A landscape,
My colour fading,
Paint peeling,
Rough and old,
Gloomy and wan?
If you followed me on a walk,
Through my own sweet fragile world,
I don’t know what you’d see,
Or to you who I’d be,
But I know who I am,
No one knows more than me.
Would you like me to tell you?
The-Truth-Will-Strike-You-Down, AKA Bonnie, 13/09/2006
Author's Note:
Right, well, hope you liked it. As always, don't forget to review! Also let me know if you notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes. Thanks!
The-Truth-Will-Strike-You-Down, AKA Bonnie