
I really want to know what you think of this, because I'm unable to explain it. But it definitely is a favourite poem written by myself. Read and review!
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 03-16-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2334251
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DOUBLE DARE
Grey clouds slowly descending
Words written in lines, whispering softly: Dare you?
The field a green rolling wave
I lay down, and drown, the only puddle of blue
Thunder booming in the distance
Verses chant a dangerous anthem: Dare you?
My eyelids shudder, soap petals falling
Moisture condenses, repents, parts in two
Heavy now, the sky is breaking
Chapters flip rapidly through the air: Dare you?
My chest rises and falls with each clap
My fingers grasp, unclasps, sweating glue
Rain falls and drenches me in a second
Dusty, dreary books repeat, repeat: Dare you?
My body struggles, stifles, still
If only - if only he knew
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