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Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry - Words: 81 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 03-16-07 - id: 2334252
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Teardrops Are High in Sodium
Author's Note: This is just how I'm feeling right now
Perfect?
I beg to differ
Maybe if tears
were less salty
My heart would unclog and find its
beaings
Great?
I beg to differ
Maybe if it was me for
once
And not someone else
Good?
I beg to differ
Maybe
your a little too
Optimistic
Bad
Yeah theres the
One
word
Summary
Perfect?
I beg to differ
Maybe
if...
But it's not
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