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Ok, so, the dashes indicate a new stanza. I don't know what I think of it, but I'd really like to know what YOU think of it.
A Day At The Circus
There’s lots of little animals
Jumping around my brain
They jump and jump and make loud noise
And they’re driving me insane
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“Stop that racket!” I shout to them
Trying hard to calm them down
But they just keep on yelling loudly
And no one else hears a sound.
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You’d think it might be cute and nice
To have a bunny in your head
Or even pleasant to have company
Like a dog content to have been fed.
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Or what about a little bat
Flitting around with ease
Maybe a cat who preens and purrs
Happy to have a mouse to tease?
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But I can tell you this right now
It’s not very nice at all
If the confusion in my head won’t stop
I think my brain will fall.
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Because animals are cute and such
I really think they are
But when they’re dancing in my brain
I’d almost rather be hit by a car.
Soooo? Gonna review? D