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Author: Tera McCaslin
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Reviews: 1 - Published: 03-20-07 - Updated: 03-20-07 - Complete - id:2336413

Ok, so, the dashes indicate a new stanza. I don't know what I think of it, but I'd really like to know what YOU think of it.

A Day At The Circus

There’s lots of little animals

Jumping around my brain

They jump and jump and make loud noise

And they’re driving me insane

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“Stop that racket!” I shout to them

Trying hard to calm them down

But they just keep on yelling loudly

And no one else hears a sound.

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You’d think it might be cute and nice

To have a bunny in your head

Or even pleasant to have company

Like a dog content to have been fed.

- - -

Or what about a little bat

Flitting around with ease

Maybe a cat who preens and purrs

Happy to have a mouse to tease?

- - -

But I can tell you this right now

It’s not very nice at all

If the confusion in my head won’t stop

I think my brain will fall.

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Because animals are cute and such

I really think they are

But when they’re dancing in my brain

I’d almost rather be hit by a car.


Soooo? Gonna review? D



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