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The Devil's Trill da da dummm...just playin'
Warnings- yaoi, shoen-ai, possibly intense cuteness and just plain kawaii moments, language, violence, and whatever else pops into my head...
AN- So, this is my first story! dances I actually came up with this idea during driver's training when my friend was driving and I was in the back seat with my headphones on. The whole thing started because I was listening to a song called, The Devil's Trill, which is a violin piece, and I just thought, "wow, wouldnt this be a cute way to fall in love? Meetin' because of music?" I love music, so my head just exploded with this idea. I hope y'all love it as much as I have fun thinking it up. And as always, reviews and stuff are nice. And im ready for you, flamers...
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Cassian must have walked the entirety of the city park over four times by now. He was exhausted and frustrated. He collapsed on the nearest park bench and sighed. It looked like his date wasn't showing up anytime soon. And God, it was cold. He hugged his jacket tighter around him and checked his watch.
Yup, it was three hours past their rendevouz time.
He ran a hand through his unruly dirty blonde hair. He was sick of getting stood up. What was with these girls lately? They always told him how gorgeous, how charming, and how sweet he was. So why wouldn't they ever show up?? He was getting tired of all these fickle girls and the way they could never make up their mind.
He sighed again and pulled himself off of the park bench and headed towards the park entrance. No use catching a cold now. Explecially with the work he had to do in the morning...
A delicate noise, however, had other plans for him. He stopped and strained his ears to try and hear what it was. It was music. Beautiful music. He tried to locate the source of it, walking in the direction in which he hoped was the right one. He didn't even bother to look around and try to remember where he was, or where he was heading. All he knew was that he had to get more of it. The music became louder. Cassian soon realized that he couldnt get enough of it. It was a drug. An addiction that already possessed him. It was intoxicating. So dark... yet...
So passionate...
Before he knew it, he was infront of an alleyway. This was the source of the music. He took a few cautious steps inside when a little boy appeared. The boy ran up to Cassian and placed a finger on his lips. Cassian took this as he should remain quiet. He put his finger to his lips, mimicking the boy. The boy smiled and motioned for Cassian to journey further into the alleyway. Cassian hesitated, unsure of what the boy's (and whoever may be further along the alleyway) plan was. The boy saw this and tugged on Cassian's jacket and began pulling him. Cassian smiled and decided to follow him. It was just a little boy. What harm could he do after all? The boy then led Cassian to the back of the alleyway, where the music was the strongest. And Cassian could see why.
Sitting against the wall was a young man, as delicate looking as his music sounded, playing a violin. His eyes were closed, allowing the music to completely take him over. A small fire lit a few feet away from him gave him a more mysterious glow. The boy sat down by the fire and motioned for Cassian to join him. Cassian, engulfed in the music, sat down unhestitatly. The young man's face screwed up in concentration as the song he was playing was coming to climax. With a few last chords, the song ended. To Cassian's surprise, he didn't want it to stop. The young man was so intriguing with his violin. The way he played it...It was if it had owned his soul... The little boy began clapping as the young man rested the violin on his lap.
"That was so pwetty Sha-a-me!!"
Cassian smiled as he saw the young man softly smile, eyes still closed.
"Thanks, Aiden."
Cassian started clapping slowly.
"That was really wondeful."
The young man lazily turned his head slightly and opened his eyes. Cassian was struck by the intensity of them right away. They were a stormy gray color that appeared older than the man who possessed them.
"Aiden...who is that??"
Cassian cleared his throat.
"Sorry, should have done that first. Name's Cassian. Cassian Van de Coup. And your playing was really amazing."
The man smiled.
"Im Jereme. And you give me too much credit. Anyone can play the violin."
"Yes, thats true...but I've never heard anyone play it so...passionately." Cassian protested.
Jereme turned his head fully so that Cassian could see his face. He was young, with black hair that framed his delicate features and pale, snow-white skin that could make him easily mistaken as a young woman.
"Beautiful..."
Cassian thought out loud.
"Perdon?"(1)
"Um...your song...it was beauitful."
Close call Cassian thought. Jereme blushed and tucked a strand of hair behind his ear.
"Thank you..."
The little boy then bounded up to Cassian.
"And I'm Aiden!!"
He said, with a huge smile only a child could have.
"Hello, Aiden. I'm Cassian. How old are you?"
Aiden held up four fingers.
"Im fauh."
Jereme chuckled from his corner.
"Don't let his apperance fool you. He's actually six."
Aiden giggled. Cassian chuckled too. It was werid. He felt his defenses going down the longer he sat with these people.
Who were these people, who lived in alleyways and played beautiful music? He was intrigued. And when Cassian Van De Coup is intrigued, there is no going back.
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AN- So...how was it? Complete shit-on-a-stick? Or has the promise of a pretty awesome story? Is it too long? Or too short? Ah! Im so confused!!
(1)-Im sorry if I use any french words incorrectly. And yes, that was french. Im actually in a spanish class, but I always pictured Jereme as a frenchie (once again, no offense).
I would love to hear your comments perferably not your flames... and ideas you come up with about this story. It would be helpful, seeing as I get writer's block sometimes...sweatdrop...anywho...please review!