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Nightless Wanderings
Author:
Swift Sunrise PM
A short poem about the coming of the sun and of course the moon. Wow. I bet I'm really beginning to bore you. Don't worry...I have something else coming...NOT about the moon...sooner or later!
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry - Words: 79 - Published: 04-19-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2349883
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Peace mounts on the horizon

as the sun,

gold Fire

comes to light,

leaving the moon to her nightless wanderings

among the cold forbidding stars.

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I don't really think the stars are all that cold and forbidding…they are more enchanting, but the word "forbidding" came out, so that's how I left it. Maybe I'll do a poem of the enchanting stars next time…good reading and much love ( to all…especially my reviewers!)

Swift Sunrise

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