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Another of my peaceful poems... This one is actually hot off the press, and I haven't given it to any of my usual critics yet, so please review. Good, bad, or indifferent, please tell me what you think, and any thoughts for improvement, of course, are eagerly welcomed.
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Lucid
Open your eyes and listen
The vision will come, just listen
I have something to tell you
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The unbroken blue of infinite clarity
Arcs high out of reach, the color
Of clichéd tears, and the ocean
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The sight of the sea you can never forget
Though the long memory stands elegiac
Of last years happiness, and of those before
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Feel the first deep breath of awareness
Like Sunday morning sunshine
Or the lingering taste of sweet tea, as you
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Press cold, wet hands to your face
Remembering that April never asks
Even its storms are warm and open