Removed lines and other rubbish XD

When I write my stories at night and then read them again in the morning I sometimes die from laughter. Often I make funny typos. Sometimes I write scenes that are just so stupid it hurts. And sometimes I just feel the need to comment some sentence, and that’s how bonuses are created XD

Have fun.

"I dare say that after those years, I got to know it better than you expected. And despite the fact that I cannot see your body, I see your darkness. It whirls underneath your skin, Zarar,
lurks in your heart and behind the irises of your eyes and inside your nostrils… "

"Hold on, I think I’m starting to get lost - do I have darkness in my nose too???"

And only on the small dark table, like the greatest treasure – lay a pile of lovingly arranged stones. They were just those usual gray stones – the ones that lay about it the dirt of every decent road. To all intents and purposes Zarar could have went outdoors and bring an unlimited quantity of them.

Yeah, and in the morning they built a dust castle just outside the house

I see a dark darkness in your life. O RLY?

The blind demon rose to his previous position and run the icy blade across Zarar's skin, leaving a symbolic broken heart on his chest – king felt the piercing, stinging pain spread through his body, but no single sound of protest came from his pursed lips. Because just after the pain desire slowly crept out of the darkness, spilling across him like viscous, golden honey.

And now the very same fragment with the use of synonyms suggested by oh-so-helpful Microsoft Word.

The visor devil rose to his prior location and scurried the sub-zero razor blade from corner to corner of Zarar's membrane, leaving a representative out of order heart on his storage place – queen felt the knife-like, hurtful hurt swell from beginning to end of his carcass, but no lone jingle of dispute came from his pursed oral cavity. Because in a minute - following the tenderness - aspiration at a snail's pace crept away of the obscurity, spilling transversely through him like glutinous, blonde baby.

(so here you basically see how very very SAD and AMTMOSPHERIC this story would be with the almighty help of MS Word XDDD I especially love how it offered ‘queen’ for ‘king’ and ‘tenderness’ instead of ‘pain’ XD and I had hard time choosing some synonyms as they were all just ‘omg-lol’ XD. Like the ‘fair-haired sugar’ instead of golden honey that now is ‘blonde baby’. Or ‘kaput’ as broken XD)

Avare’s smile burst like a balloon.
Awww... And the next morning Zarar ate his cheeseburger, boarded his rocket and flew back onto Mars. Yeah.

And then Avare kissed him with a thirty-years delay.

‘Three days’ or ‘From A to Z’

it happens that way when you chose the names of main heroes XD (the A and Z letter I mean XD)

Zarar valued Naas because he was the most interactive of all three.

Beside him, among the bright strands of hair, scattered about on the floorboards rested a dagger that demon had returned a long forgotten look to his hair with.

Ok. this was just some crazy lol idea, don’t ask XD

Curiosities

- At the very beginning Zarar was supposed to be a sad sad king running away from his sad sad life in the sad sad castle. And Avare was to be a blind salesman of something that is saved by Zarar from the tax collector.

- The note from which the story came to life, written down in a sudden flow of inspiration one day sounded: „Three demons, eyes burnt out, he became cruel”

When I read it a month later I didn’t have a slightest idea what it is about and so in the end I made a fusion of 3 different ideas. But I still don’t really know who was intended to become cruel cause Zarar was an asshole from the very beginning and Avare... Avare was supposed to be a damn salesman XD

- In the beginning I imagined burning eyes out by digging some hot bar into them (sweet) Luckily the heated up dagger put close to the eyes is enough to do it.

- When I was writing this story I constantly asked my family and other people strange questions like ‘can you blink when your eyes are burnt out??? Can you cry then???’ and my dad described me the ways of taking sight away. For example – you attach somebody’s eyelids so that he cannot close his eyes and force him to look into the sun so long that he goes blind. I like this idea XD evil

- When I was writing the sex scene, there was a moment where Zarar REALLY landed on the bottom all of the sudden XD

- The house came to life in the middle of writing – to say the truth I never expected something like this to happen in the story, but to some extent it is a metaphor anyway.
Yeah, thats me and my stories XD

- Zarar means ‘harm’ (from turkish) and Avare means ‘idle, inactive’ And devam names mean exactly what Avare said they mean. Yeah, turkish rox my sox XD (and btw, 'devam' means something too, but it may as well mean 'crappy crap' becasue it was a random word I chose XD)

- Devam were supposed to be very chatty, talkative demons that belonged to no one at all, did not fulfill any wishes and were damn pain in the ass

- Zarar was to run away from normal, usual execution. The whole story was supposed to start with the conversation on the black tower where we get to know that the king will die in few days because the time of his rule run out.

- At first it was Zarar who was about to kiss Avare when Avare almost sank a dagger into his hear (because he actually was very very VERY revengeful at the beginning. After he was no longer a SALESMAN, I mean XD) and in the second version it was Avare to kiss Zarar first XD but I got lost, really XD I was imagining the ‘scene’ and all dialogues so completely otherwise, but it just write itsef like it did and I won’t change anything more here as I have so many more stories to write in my head that there is no time for going back!

Thank you all for reading!