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O Wisdom just,
Fly your arrow straight
That it may strike me
And grant to me your eyes
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I lay stripped
My flesh torn away
And all my soul laid bare
For any man to see
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My own eyes, gone,
Betrayers, ripped out
To follow behind her
Blinded to all else
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Beguiled by her charms
Her words, like daggers
But whispered sweet and low
A smile that drives to distraction
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She leaves me here
With practiced ease,
Her fancy drawn elsewhere
Fickle and ever changing
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Left behind
I cry out blindly
But am left with only
Her footsteps and fading laugh
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O Wisdom just,
Fly your arrow straight
That it may strike me
And grant to me your eyes
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For it seems that
All the worlds a stage
And I have played the fool
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It’s been a while, ne?
Yeah, I don’t know WHAT this is except that it probably sucks- but what the hell I’ll post it any way . . . please don’t hurt me. Or flame me. This is my first real attempt an non-ryhming poetry so it’s gonna suck, but I don’t need putdowns. But /Please/ feel entirely /free/ to leve me some constructive criticism!! By reviewing of course.