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Cake
Author:
Zeurpiet PM
Five burning candles...
Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 93 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 05-08-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2359145
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Cake

.x.X.x.

Five burning candles

on the birthday cake, fading.

No wishes; no wind.

.x.X.x.


So it's my birthday and thus I wanted to write something celebratory and in the birthday spirit... yeah, this didn't quite turn out that way. The meaning is a little hidden so it may take a moment to understand, but I don't think it's too difficult. I suppose this haiku could be interprated as both happy and sad. Don't get it? Message me and I'll explain. Review please!!
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