
perhaps my least favorite love poem that i have ever written. but, please, read and review it's not quite the typical love poem.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry/Romance - Words: 156 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 05-11-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2360502
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Rubik's Conundrum
Look at a Rubik's cube.
Each side is a different facet of our relationship.
yellow, green, orange, white, red, blue
Become love, hate, understanding, fights, forgiveness, anger.
I mix them all together,
My actions intertwining the emotions that we feel.
And carefully, move-by-move, you put them back into place.
A logical algorithm for solving the complex infrastructure that is "we."
And I watch in awe…
I watch your hands (your mind) so skillfully moving the panels back together.
I watch your eyes watching me.
Instinctively you make everything work the way it should
(An unfair burden I place on you… but you'll have to teach me how to do all that you do).
For every illogical, irrational move that I make,
You counter with the opposite.
It amazes me. fascinates.
Without you, I would be the intermingled faces.
And for making our cube correct, I'll always love you.
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