AUTHOR'S NOTE: This story is going through intense revisions. I would like to thank for the first set of readers for their support.

I wrote trash and decided it wasn't enough to write trash.

Now I'm aiming for decent trash that is worthy of my brother site, TheBreakdancingNinja. The new revision has classier word choice (ie: the words "dick", "clit", "cock", "pussy", and other variants have all but disappeared in this new version, replaced by descriptions and probably won't be making their appearances until at least chapter twelve or fourteen) and the new revision builds more literary parallels as it goes along (as is the advantage of having finished the first draft of the story already). Other editorial decisions will be made in a timely manner.

I am taking the advice of Ind-Fam who suggested I write erotic romanticism as opposed to romantic eroticism. Though chapters thirteen and up from the original will stay sexual and gritty, they will not have been written in vain. I am going to place everything in a new context and redefine some of the story's terms and characters. I am open to suggestions and also to harsh criticism. I thank Eki Furukizu Sagaku for the PM suggestion of alternate endings. I will take them into consideration. On a side note, I have started Anthony's story, which is a bit more decadent in style and more subtle (that will be released within the next two months, after my summer preparations. Forward me any suggestions between then and now).

Thank you, again. Happy writing/reading. And rock on. May 8, 2007.