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This is the first work I’ve ever submitted, therefore would you please be kind and leave me a review if you read? Even if it’s Anonymous and it says one word it would make my day. Thank you and enjoy.
P.S. I Love You
I love you more than words can ever say
More than you will know
More than my heart can tell
Every word you say
Means everything to me
All I want from you is your love
00
Not your silly faces
Not one hundred faces,
Just an unending you
I want you to understand
That you are what I need
Not someone to kill my demand
Goodnight for now
I need to get unnumb
Before I can tell myself
How my heart broke when I
Lost you to life.
Ok, do you have any critisism? Or did you like it?