I'm pretty proud of this poem, one of my better ones, I think. I'm randomly going through this "lets write a lot of good writing" phase, it's making me happy.

so please read and review and I will love you forever, and we could try this out sometime... wink wink

hah, no but please review?

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Pretty Pink Lips that I touch
that make you quiver
as if an ocean is roiling in you

blood vessels pumping waves of absinthe
under translucent skin
And I trace them across your hands,

arms,
breasts,
hips

as they twine through your body

-

Gasp

-

Pretty Pink lips are sliding together
a sick feeling rising in my gorge
Butterflies

trying to
fly out
my mouth

And they do
They fly into you with their wings of

orange
goldsilver
green

making you shudder, making you
whimper
as those wings beat gently on your organs

A brush of silk sliding along your
kidneys
A brush of silk sliding across your mouth

--And I

------love

----------you