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Author: Blackbird-chan
Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Published: 05-24-07 - Updated: 05-24-07 - Complete - id:2366316

I don't really know what's going on with me but all of sudden I have to write... all of the time, so here is another poem that I just wrote

It's a bit angsty, wasn't intending that but it works and I think it's morbid in a beautiful way.

Of course, it would always be lovely to hear your opinions... review please?

enjoy


I Want You, You Say

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“I want you,” you say

touching me
stroking me
petting me

and you fill me and push into me
and push and push

Until everything has dropped off of me,
out of me
Intestines, stomache and kidneys
hit the floor in a wet splash of colors

Their pungent smell rises but you don't care
you just push and push and push

And it's sharp but I need it

because I no longer have any of those other things,
organs

because you want me,
you fill me



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