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Bitter
Author: life on rewind PM
Forbidden things taste bitter. [haiku]
Rated: Fiction K - English - Romance/Poetry - Words: 47 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 05-25-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2366589
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Bitter

Lust is forbidden;
Forbidden things taste bitter-
Exactly like you.


AN: First ever haiku attempted. I really enjoyed writing this … reviews greatly appreciated for this and other writing, just to tell me whether I have the right idea. It only takes one click of a button (:
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