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Author: poetic abortion
Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Reviews: 21 - Published: 05-30-07 - Updated: 05-30-07 - id:2369166

you and me.
by: poetic abortion (3/8/2007)


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i keep thinking that i have done God wrong
because i think (know) that i am
filthy filthy filthyfilthyfil--
because i keep thinking of you and me
and that little town of Bethlehem
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request:
From, Maddie: "Jesus and Mary/Judas where in love. Write about it. (Please?)"

author's note:
The last line, I know, should be changed to "that little town in Israel"...but Bethlehem sounds better, anyway. Plus, this is a draft--thus, unfinished--and I would like crit, if you please, before I give it to my friend for her birth-day (I love you, Maddie-kins ). Hopefully, with a better title in mind when I send it to her.
- poetic abortion



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