Written for MyChemistryCascade's FiftyFive Fiction challenge.

Challenge: Create your own short story of fifty-five words or less.

His arms rested on the salmon lockers on either side of me.

He looked at me, his eyes begging permission.

My eyes slowly shut, giving him my answer.

He leaned in and kissed me, a searing kiss right on the lips.

From behind him came the fast steps and furious shrieks of his now ex-girlfriend.

This story has exactly 55 words. I'd love to know what you think about this. You're welcome to choose from the ubiquitous list: Wow, Brilliant, Great, Good, Decent, Bad, Terrible, Horrendous, Go hide in a corner.