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Author: Chidori Nadare
Fiction Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Fantasy - Reviews: 2 - Published: 06-09-07 - Updated: 08-21-07 - Complete - id:2374133

Beauté Cachée: Éclipse


The blue and yellow fingers start the day
That I waited silently for centuries,
Another forgotten field of realities will stay
With the test of time and can never be weathered.

Apollo still blazing the fire of life,
Not knowing the coming of Destruction.
Slowly engulfing the light,
The darkness remained and the hope almost gone.

The centuries I spanned in waiting,
Once again seeing the nearly menacing event;
Yami hides Hikari in the devastating road,
And Hikari tries to cut the shadow shackles.

The devastation feared by many,
Only the chosen see its real visage.

A/N: Here we go, the revised version of Beauté Cachée: Éclipse The first one's horrible (I know that). I'm not sure about this one as well. Constructive criticisms (and normal reviews) are appreciated and returned. So please read and review. :)



© Copyright 2007 Chidori Nadare (FictionPress ID:518699).


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