
Written awhile ago, but I finished it today. I didn't like it when I first wrote. Now I think that it's okay. Whatever. Just read. Short. Kinda cool beginning. Lots of figurative language. In the beginning. Rhyme and meter.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 227 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 06-15-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2376905
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Scarlet Redemption
A porcelain heart breaks
A transparent whisper lies
A cloud of smoke consumes the sky
Then steam begins to rise
A flame has been ignited
Ashes have been blown
A glass bottle has been shattered
You're standing all alone
Yeah, the city has been cleared
And you are all to blame
This is all you get
When you constantly crave fame
By you can be redeemed
Through all of this mess
If you go to the One who died
And to Him you confess
For right now you are scarlet
And the redemption is what you seek
Yet you are too prideful,
Sullen and weak
Scarlet are the letters
That you are given now
But if you open up your heart
And if him coming in you allow
You can be redeemed
For even some great were once in rags
They lived inside their cars
And ate out of small bags
Let God's love write
your story
Let His love paint your life
Put away all of your sorrows
Put down your drugs and your knife
Let the only blood you see
Be the blood of Jesus Christ
A gift that is pure and holy
Not something that the devil enticed
Let redemption enter your life
Erase all of your past
Even though your redemption will be scarlet
At least it will last
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