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Author's Notes: Okay people, this is my first poem, so please be gentle. Bear with me if it's confusing, okay?
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From the moment I opened my eyes
And saw it there, in front of me
I tried to reach out
But my arms were tied
And the people I loved held me down
It was like my soul was on fire
And I had to watch the flames
Reach it, burn it
When I finally was able to untie my arms
And I reached out, took it in my hands
It slipped between my shaky fingers
Because all that was left was dust
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So? What did you think? Please don't flame if you hated it, give me constructive critisicm instead!