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You smile as the nicotine
hits your veins
Without it
you'd be insane
But you already are
I know you are
ignoring me
Smoking in the car
ignoring me
Here I am
a child of five
a child damned not to survive
even I'm surprised I'm alive
My lungs are dead
but they're still puffing
I can't breathe
but they're still smoking
Daddy, mummy can't you see
your cancer sticks are killing me
I digress.
Okay, that's it from me, review? And, yes, I do know this is not a proper poem. I don't do things properly, I get it.