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This poem is about hoping to get notice for you intention. You wanted it to subtle but yet also wanted that your intention to be known..This is the poem about wanting more than just being friends..
Rated: Fiction T - English - Poetry - Words: 135 - Published: 07-09-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2388007
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Did You Notice A Change?
by Kenishiro
(04/07/07)
i guess this poem clearly sent it's message. i don't think i need to elaborate more
Did You Notice A Change?
Did you notice a change
In my reaction towards you
Did you notice a change
In the way i look at you
Baby, i have a change of heart
i want more than this
Mere affection of you company
i want your attention
i want you to notice
Did you notice a change, darling?
Baby, i have a change of heart
i want more than this
Mere joy of your brief presence
i want more of you
i want you to stay
Did you notice a change, darling?
i just couldn't say it out, yet..
Feedback: Yes, please. Constructive critism appreciated.
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