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A/N: So, I wrote this poem a while ago, and then rewrote it, but I’ve never been too sure which version was better. So I’m putting them both here. Please tell me which you liked best.
Distorted
Look in the mirror
Do you see yourself?
Do you truly see yourself?
I do
I look in the mirror
I see myself
I my tears
I see my hair matter with blood
I see the bruise on my face
I see myself wash off the blood
Wipe away the tears
Force a smile
I see you come up behind me
I see myself turn to face you
Force a smile
You scowl
You raise your hand
I see you shatter my image
I see you leave as I stand
Face the mirror, hide the new bruise
Continue in the lie that engulfs me
I see something that I didn’t want to see