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Author: xXHaunted CookieXx
Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Spiritual - Reviews: 3 - Published: 08-19-07 - Updated: 08-19-07 - Complete - id:2404941

AN : ya, this is the result talking to my friend during a thunder storm, then listening to music to get inspiration, and THEN having the aforementioned inspiration attack your brain.

Enjoy:)


A storm. The best kind of storm. Just the right mix of rain and lightning.

Two dancers, illuminated by a flash, their music audible only after the thunder.

We'll do it all / Everything / On our own

Two rain-soaked bodies, holding eachother close

We don't need / Anything / Or anyone

Another flash, and the smaller jumps. His partner soothes him with words lost in the rumble of thunder

If I lay here / If I just lay here / Would you lie with me and just forget the world?

The two dancers sway to their song, occasionally adding a little spin, but always to return to eachother.

I don't quite know / How to say / How I feel

The two dancers keep moving, always swaying or twirling not always with the beat, but eerily beautiful in the pouring rain.

Those three words / Are said too much / They're not enough

In the next flash, the taller pulls his partner closer, whispering something lost in the next rumble.

If I lay here / If I just lay here / Would you lie with me and just forget the world?

The smaller looks into his partner’s eye’s and a smile touches his face.

Forget what we're told / Before we get too old / Show me a garden that's bursting into life

The smile is retuned by the taller, who is immediately embraced by his diminutive dance partner.

Let's waste time / Chasing cars / Around our heads

Encircled by warm arms, the answer to an unknown question is whispered to a waiting consort, who grins at what he hears.

I need your grace / To remind me / To find my own

If I lay here / If I just lay here / Would you lie with me and just forget the world?

The grin is soon reflected, and a dancer literally swept off his feet.

Forget what we're told / Before we get too old / Show me a garden that's bursting into life

The matching grins burst and become happy laughter, inaudible only during the peals of splitting clouds.

All that I am / All that I ever was / Is here in your perfect eyes, they're all I can see

And as suddenly as the laughter began, it is silenced

I don't know where / Confused about how as well / Just know that these things will never change for us at all

The silence is caused by a spontaneous kiss, the kind you only get after confessing your love for somebody while dancing in the rain.

If I lay here / If I just lay here / Would you lie with me and just forget the world?


AN : yes, i know.. it was fluffly crap. but hey, it was written between 10:30 (i think ) and 12:30 at night (in the morning? i'unno). Please review, it makes me happy. and happy people return favours!


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