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Carly the cat
This my very first story. I still have it and thought I'll show you the orginal version. No, I don't write like this anymore...give me a break I was six OO
There was once a cat named Carly. Carly had 2 brothers and 1 sister. Their names were Marshmellow, Todd and Bell. Their mother's name was Mellow. They lived in a garabge can. They were very poor. One day a robber came to them. He killed her brothers and sister and mother! Carly ran away to a cat shop. There she met a girl name Amy. Amy liked Carly. Carly liked Amy. Amy buys Carly.
Amy came home to her brother, John.
"I have a cat," said Amy.
"What's her name?" asked John.
"I don't know," Amy said.
"How about Carly?" asked John.
"That's a good name!" said Amy.
Amy and Carly played with each other until Amy's mother said she couldn't keep her.
"No!" Amy cried and ran away with Carly in her arms.
Amy continued walking when a man stopped. "Do you need a ride?" he asked. Amy nodded and both walked in. Her mother never told her about stranger danger.
"Where are we going?" Amy asked.
"To Mex...Texas."
"Well I want to go home."
"No."
Amy screamed. Carly jumped out the window and ran to a phone. She calls the police. The police comes. They arrest the man. Amy is happy. Carly is happy.
Two years is Amy's birthday. Amy gets to keep Carly. Carly gets a glass of milk.
THE END xDxD