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WARNINGS!!!!! This poem contains: self mutilation (also known as 'cutting'), a sensetive topic, violence. Please note that I do not hurt myself in this way nor am I advocating others to do this. I am simply assuming what one that has this problem feels.
Of The Finest Wine
When a blade cuts close
Into your skin
No other feeling can compare.
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The surge of exhilaration
The stinging shock that
Reminds me I'm alive.
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It only takes one swift dip
Of the razor sharp knife
Digging into my flesh.
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The canyon is carved
And sluggishly floods
Of a thick royal red.
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Rivers drip down, coating
My wrist like a cascading
Waterfall, of crimson liquid.
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So overwhelming, the feeling
Not sweet nor bland
But enough to satisfy the mind.
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Pouring out my troubles
In a bittersweet trail
Of the finest wine.
A/N: I wrote this during class. Lol, my first day of school and I was already distracted by writing!!! I'm sorry if the rhythm is a bit off beat, but I was multitasking at the time. I do believe it came out fairly well, but that is my opinion. What's yours???
Review please!!!!