This poem has a second version,but I left it in school. If you'd please be so kind as to revise this one for me,I'd compare it with the second and post it together at once. Thanks! This was my first draft,kind of sucks.

Sexy Vampirechick

Thunder roared and lightning flashed
The cries of the Lord echoes in our minds
The earth shook with forced bearing the birth of the Devil’s child
Yet I was to be born

Everything in life was not given as it is
I was a stubborn child
I resent people of all kind, I destroy, I eliminate
I live alone, I have no friends, I have no family

Human minds, how easily they give up and retreat to their very stage
On Halloween night I met someone during the ball of masquerade
Freakishly handsome, he somehow attracted my eyes
We became friends and spend times talking of the world’s never ending hate

So fascinating that I found someone that was just like me
The moon casts it bright glow around us enveloping our souls
It was a gift that was dropped down from heaven
From the eyes of a devil I have been granted with eyes of an angel

My family started talking to me and for the first time I didn’t mind
I kept my distance for other strangers, though I promised not to hurt them
His visits were a great difference in my life
I met his family and they too enjoy my presence

I was brushed by a tingling feeling when he puts his hands around my shoulder
My heart skips a beat when he stares into my eyes
I laugh to every joke he makes, though it sometimes isn’t so funny
He just makes me so happy, I finally discovered the crux of love

Death was what interests me in the past
Now I only wish to live for eternity
With him all my problems are wiped away
He’s is for one, my one true soul mate

She mesmerized him, she stole him, she seduced him
Now he’s gone, who was she to do this
How could I have no seen her evil plot
Out of the blue, when you let your guards down, they sneak back into your life

Thunder roars and lightning flashes, time for my hunt
Down in the dark alley, where no one lies, only me and another
The rickety steps of our shoes, the foot prints of us both
Out came one, but not two

I never saw him again, I guess he knew why she disappeared
I was once again alone, half of me still lives the other part died along with her
Instead of what I was hoping for, our friendship turned us into enemies
Born on rainy night, live through a lousy life, and die in a dreadful sight