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A/N: Hi everyone! I wrote this song ages ago, more or less a few months back. Although I have been never been in love before (well at least that's what I think) I've always been quite a believer in true love and romance. Hmm, well I got inspired by Mary J. Blige's song called Beautiful Ones and when I first listened to it, I fell in love with it straight away. Trust me, she writes good songs and if there's any fans of her out there then you might agree with me on that one. Anyway this is the song that I came up with. Enjoy!
Enchanting One
Oh no, so wonderful
So wonderful
A fella hurt me by
Breaking my heart in two
I thought that I will never love again
But then you came into my life
An angel in disguise
I fell in love
Straight away with this vision
You are the enchanting one
And you captivate me with your tender charm
Please stay by my side
Please satisfy me
I’m burning up here
I want you to take me to paradise
You’re my lover, the one I can rely on
Oh, I want to marry you in the near future
You are the enchanting one
And you captivate me with your tender charm
Please stay by my side
Oh enchanting one, I belong to you
You’re my every thing, need you everyday
Don’t you ever go
Dressed in a white gown
Tears are spilling from my blue eyes
With this ring I thee wed, giving you all of me
I will bring you so much joy and comfort babe
I promise you, with my soul baby I will remain
Faithful and I will be there, yeah
You are the enchanting one
And you captivate me with your tender charm
Please stay by my side
Oh enchanting one, I belong to you
You’re my every thing, need you everyday
Don’t you ever go
You are the enchanting one
And you captivate me with your tender charm
Please stay by my side
Oh enchanting one, I belong to you
You’re my every thing, need you everyday
Don’t you ever go
Yeah, oh my prince
You’re wonderful
You, you, you, you, you, you, you, you
You, you, you, you, you
Oh ah-yeah, oh, ooh, oh, ooh, yeah, yeah
A/N: Please review – whether it’s good, bad or just even constructive criticism. Criticism would only help me improve my writing. I want to hear your opinions on this :)