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Author: Oracle of Destiny
Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Parody - Reviews: 4 - Published: 09-28-07 - Updated: 09-28-07 - Complete - id:2419922

A/N: Hi everyone! I wrote this song ages ago, more or less a few months back. Although I have been never been in love before (well at least that's what I think) I've always been quite a believer in true love and romance. Hmm, well I got inspired by Mary J. Blige's song called Beautiful Ones and when I first listened to it, I fell in love with it straight away. Trust me, she writes good songs and if there's any fans of her out there then you might agree with me on that one. Anyway this is the song that I came up with. Enjoy!


Enchanting One

Oh no, so wonderful

So wonderful


A fella hurt me by

Breaking my heart in two

I thought that I will never love again

But then you came into my life

An angel in disguise

I fell in love

Straight away with this vision


You are the enchanting one

And you captivate me with your tender charm

Please stay by my side


Please satisfy me

I’m burning up here

I want you to take me to paradise

You’re my lover, the one I can rely on

Oh, I want to marry you in the near future


You are the enchanting one

And you captivate me with your tender charm

Please stay by my side

Oh enchanting one, I belong to you

You’re my every thing, need you everyday

Don’t you ever go


Dressed in a white gown

Tears are spilling from my blue eyes

With this ring I thee wed, giving you all of me

I will bring you so much joy and comfort babe

I promise you, with my soul baby I will remain

Faithful and I will be there, yeah


You are the enchanting one

And you captivate me with your tender charm

Please stay by my side

Oh enchanting one, I belong to you

You’re my every thing, need you everyday

Don’t you ever go

You are the enchanting one

And you captivate me with your tender charm

Please stay by my side

Oh enchanting one, I belong to you

You’re my every thing, need you everyday

Don’t you ever go


Yeah, oh my prince

You’re wonderful

You, you, you, you, you, you, you, you

You, you, you, you, you

Oh ah-yeah, oh, ooh, oh, ooh, yeah, yeah


A/N: Please review – whether it’s good, bad or just even constructive criticism. Criticism would only help me improve my writing. I want to hear your opinions on this :)



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