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Title: Mentor
Summary: A mentor and her student. The student observes and dreams.
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phrases come alive. molding
themselves into a work of
beauty. Dipping the nib, she goes
at it again, and I, the
observer watch and
dream.
“wholly good, its smile gleams
up at me. an innocence not known for years
erupts and I clutch the baby. shiny,
wet eyes. they’re mine. Iris, that’ll be her
name.”
reverie broken, time begins anew. done
so soon? no, break. relief. shutting door
and I’m alone. Looking back at the
words and dream again.
Dreamer, Dreamer, can you one day act?
pen in hand, I relax and breathe
deeply. words begin to whisper and I
listen. an art form to be true, for the
sounds are art. the words stop and i
gaze at the finished piece.
“A mentor, I see,” she says and I smile. yes,
a mentor.