
| The Ritual
Author: 51minutes A poetical recording of a traditional Chinese death anniversary ritual. This is in commemoration of my maternal grandmother's passing. May she rest in peace.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Spiritual - Words: 186 - Updated: 04-21-12 - Published: 10-06-07 - Status: Complete - id: 2423097
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Deftly,
an old hand
twists a fan out of the papers
A quick flick of the wrist
the flock takes wing
and descends into the hungry flames
the gold and silver foil
catching the sun's rays for
one last wink.
Occasionally an attempt
for escape
but there is none
for the successful are
always returned
to the fire's belly.
The papers swiftly curling
Morphing to ash
The pit rapidly filling
as molehill grows up
to become mountain.
Orange tongues
Soot edged fingers reach up
fueled by the offerings
the mourners respond
and back off
only to come back
when the fire quiets
like dancers weaving in and
around
each other
going out and coming back
again and again as
the flames are appeased
until sated
followed by a quick digestion
and back to the feeding
like the ebb and flow
of water swirling down a funnel –
invariably drawn to the eye.
The fire is a god
The mourners its priests
The papers their offerings
The dance – their worship
When the mourners have been emptied
of their
prayers and
sorrows,
they retreat
until next year.
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