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Author: Oracle of Destiny
Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10-06-07 - Updated: 10-06-07 - Complete - id:2423302

A/N: Hi everyone! This is just a sonnet that I wrote a few days back and it is based on a true story. About two or three months back a man who is ten years older than me (and who's a friend too) said that I was immature for my age as I liked going out with my parents and spend time at home rather than going out - he said that a family outing is a nightmare for a person the age of 15. I was kind of upset about this and strange to say I didn't have a go at him at all as he wanted to understand me a bit better and to help me with things in life. So this sonnet is dedicated to my friend.


Immature

How dare you call me immature when

You know I’m almost twenty?

Just because I don’t go out

Smoking, drinking, partying

Doesn’t mean I am immature

Everyone learns lessons

At some stage in their life

So just let me be and I will

Learn things in my own time

I admit that I do have a hell

Of a long time to go but

I know I will grow up

And encounter different experiences

But have some faith in me


A/N: Please review – whether it’s good, bad or just even constructive criticism. Criticism would only help me improve my writing. I want to hear your opinions on this :)


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