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Author: Blackened Blood
Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Horror - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-14-07 - Updated: 01-11-08 - id:2426348

I must go

Into the night

Where I dream

There is fright

The longer I live

I find to regret

I need to give my life

Before I forget,

Before it’s too late

I’ve arrived at the front gate

Into the forest

I find it

My tool,

My mini killing tool

It’s a blade,

A shinning blade

That raids my skin

With a single touch,

A new path leads into me

While I bleed,

I think of greed

How I got nothing

How I am nothing,

On why I’m here

I shed a single tear

The pain is harsh,

I’m nearly there,

Almost there

I hear a crack

I turned back

He’s here

I do it harder

He starts running

I feel a jerk, the blade escaping my wrist

I almost got a check off my list

He grabs me

Holds me

Kisses my hair

I hug him back,

I’m being carried away into the night,

With prince charming in my sight

Do I still want to die tonight?

I think not,

‘Cause with him by my side

I feel everything inside

She awoke with a start

Then I felt the beating of my heart

I thought she was dead

I kissed her on the head

If she was gone

I would follow along

Cause I couldn’t live without her

No matter where we were

I would find a cure

For the pain,

It will act the same

I’ll help take it away

What could I say to how I feel this way?

I awoke

With a fright

I dreamt,

Of the light

I would of died

If he’d never come,

My hand feels numb,

A kiss on my forehead

Is to much unsaid,

I took his hand

He got up to stand,

Now lying in the hospital bed,

“I’m glad you’re not dead.” He said

“Me too.” I crooned,

He reached over, fully kissing me on the lips

Me, taking little nips

I think everythings better unsaid

Until I’m not lying in this hospital bed


If you didn't get that poem its about a girl who hates her life and always has nightmares. One night she decides she want to die, so she goes into a forest and found her knife that she hid for emergency, and with that she would use to kill herself. She thinks about the pain, but not the physical pain, the mental pain, how she gets treated like nothing. When she thinks of greed, that everyone one around her are rich fools, like her parents, which her parents give her nothing, which turns into how she feels, she is nothing. Then she finds a boy how goes to her school, the guy that she likes who’s he never thought he would like her back, so she cuts faster and deeper, until he reaches her and takes the knife from her hand. 'I almost got a check of my list' means that when you have chores on a list then you check it off when you’re done? Well it’s just like that except it as for her to die. Then he shows affection for her, as how afraid she was going to die, 'cause the first time he saw her, he was in love so he doesn't want to lose her, so he takes her to the hospital. When she said 'with him by my side, I feel everything inside' means, how much she loves him for being there, and rescuing her from her suicidal act, before she passed out from lack of blood. The italic is in his point of view, 'she woke up with a start, then I felt the beating of my heart' is that he thought she was going to die so he felt so bad that his heart stopped, and restarted when she woke up (Not literally). So he kissed her on the head, glad that she was up and alive. 'If she was gone, then I'll follow along' means that if she died, he would commit suicide to be with her again. Then he says his going to find a cure for the pain will feel 'cause for it will act the same, well that means she would be mentally scarred for life for what happened that night and throughout her life, that he would distract the pain, and make it go away. 'What could I say to how I feel this way' means that he doesn't have words for how much he loves and cares for her and how scared he was when he saw her covered in blood. When the words are back to normal it’s the, girl's point of view, when she awoke in he dreams she dreamt of the light. The light is when you die; you see a bright light to going into heaven, so when she awoke she thought she was dead for a couple seconds. Then she says she would have died if he'd never come, well, you should know what that means but the message is, She's glad her crush found her, and she found out he liked her too. Her hand feels numb because she was cutting it, so it hurts now, but not before. Then he kisses her forehead, like in his point of view, then she says 'is too much unsaid' means how she now understands how he cares for her and stuff. So she took his hand, then he got up to stand, then he lies beside her in the hospital bed then says, "I'm glad your not dead", "Me too." She crooned, he leant over and kissed her on the lips and she kissed back. 'Everything’s better unsaid, until I'm not lying in this hospital bed' means she wont talk about why she attempted to commit suicide and how her life went to make her want to commit suicide until she leaves hospital.


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